I am loving this! I don't quite know where to start, except to say that with a lesser writer this could so easily have ended up falling flat. But instead you have turned it into something brilliant. It's so hot, so in character and so freaking hilarious.
I love Donna's practicality about the whole thing. Also, the arguing about the coat (and her getting it, as if there was ever any doubt), horny!Ten again ("What device?"), the Doctor promising to reciprocate (yes, please!) and the shared orgasm ("Can you stand?" LOL!). Was the increased intensity of the latter because they were physically close, or because the bond is getting stronger? Are they playing with fire a bit doing what they did - or does it take full on penetrative sex to complete the mating bond?
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Date: 2008-08-27 01:23 pm (UTC)I love Donna's practicality about the whole thing. Also, the arguing about the coat (and her getting it, as if there was ever any doubt), horny!Ten again ("What device?"), the Doctor promising to reciprocate (yes, please!) and the shared orgasm ("Can you stand?" LOL!). Was the increased intensity of the latter because they were physically close, or because the bond is getting stronger? Are they playing with fire a bit doing what they did - or does it take full on penetrative sex to complete the mating bond?