Look at how failtastic I am; I forgot to comment again anyway!
Let's try this again.
THIS whole paragraph had me in stitches:
"Maybe, ummmm, a little too much mood?" he quickly said and, out of the corner of her eye, she saw him covertly slashing two fingers across his neck. The music screeched to a halt and the mirror ball withdrew rather sullenly.
I love the idea of the TARDIS sulking a little. "I was TRYING to HELP." Poor TARDIS.
And I cannot be the only one slain by the self-sucking implication (To her surprise, he blushed. "Moving right along," he said, clearing his throat and taking the bottle from her). Naughty, naughty! LOL. Officially *dead* over here.
Sad this fic has only one more chapter. Sequel! Kidding. Maybe.
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Let's try this again.
THIS whole paragraph had me in stitches:
"Maybe, ummmm, a little too much mood?" he quickly said and, out of the corner of her eye, she saw him covertly slashing two fingers across his neck. The music screeched to a halt and the mirror ball withdrew rather sullenly.
I love the idea of the TARDIS sulking a little. "I was TRYING to HELP." Poor TARDIS.
And I cannot be the only one slain by the self-sucking implication (To her surprise, he blushed. "Moving right along," he said, clearing his throat and taking the bottle from her). Naughty, naughty! LOL. Officially *dead* over here.
Sad this fic has only one more chapter.
Sequel!Kidding.Maybe.Loved it!